what is a good conclusion paragraph about music?
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So it turns out writing insightful 500+ word paragraphs about music and film is harder than it seems. While I managed to make complete Top 10 lists for film, television, videogames and music in 2009, this year I got lazy/bored and kinda never finished. I did lists for TV and videogames, probably because those are [...]
In that document are a good number of paragraphs about music
Hallo! Ich werde gerner auf Englisch schreiben, weil mein Deutsch ist etwar rostig :P I worked for an American exchange organization for many years, so I am very familiar with!
Your letter is good, but I have one big suggestion: take the paragraphs about music (piano), art and school (from the bottom) and move them **above** the part where you talk about your friends. Those paragraphs have some very good details that will help you find a family, but the details about hanging with your friends, shopping, etc. are not as strong as your hobbies. You should put your strongest information first.
Also a small thing that you maybe should not fix because it's very "German" and I like that, but... it is "sporty" not "sportive" :)
Viel Glueck! Ich habe ein Blog, und hab nur Gestern ueber die Gastfamilienaufsatz geschrieben -- But I wanted to give you direct advice and not just a link